Self-Esteem (Free Verse Improv)

At first, you compare, like side-by-side 
metronome tick and tock from (not) you to you and back.

At second tick, brick-by-brick are towers built in defense
against non-existent foes.  A miner's diligence, it takes
to dig beneath in roundabout ways; to catch off guard, 
defenses down.

At third tock, through periscopes you peer
submerged in oceans never mapped, gone
off to uninvited parties on battleboats in sailor 
hats, avoiding uncalled, unreal, unpassable 
muster.

At last (finè) alarm clock sounds
and wakes you up to morning self-esteem -
not generically from factory but naturally old-fashion
style with farmer's soil plus rain and sun,
with omega-3.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 2:42 PM
something with meat! to really ponder....Light & Love
Culverhouse Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 8:42 PM
Great work!! I see you have bee at the soup for a while... Hope you will be inspired and prolific in verse to share with the broth of poetry. Well done writing!
Brown Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 12:04 PM
I am just starting to read today and I must say there are some exceptional poems posted. Glad yours was included in my reading today Chad. Love, Carol
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