Self-Dissection

Self-dissection
By Stina lu 

Stab yourself with a sharp dagger 
Fresh blood splashing
No one stops you
There’s no piercing scream
No one scolds you 
There's no worry about curses and reprisals

To air your pure heart in the sunlight
Wipe gently the humble soul
To hold your guts high up in the sky
Let the moon and the sun penetrate and judge.

Stop the bee humming in your head
Place reason on the left brain
and passion on the right side. 
They don’t owe each other.

Dust covered thick in your lung
which should be peeled layer by layer.
Make your breath smooth again
Every alveoli feels fresh

After all this labor
Clean the wound and suture it 
Time will erase it 
A new lease on life
A reborn phoenix arises from the ash
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Evans Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 2:51 PM
This poem speaks of nobility. It's always a good idea to stay humble. Good write.
Lu Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 7:23 PM
yes. Sometimes we forget the importance of self-criticism
Obua Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 5:49 PM
Nice Poem
Lu Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 7:19 PM
Thanks a lot.
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