self serving reflections

how can one so discerning ~ be totally blind to all concerning 

said the suicidal egotist ~ then turned and shot up the mirror
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Cunningham Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 11:54 PM
Maybe his ego had took a hit and he wanted to punish himself by shooting his own reflection. Not only that but now he's got seven years of bad luck. Tom
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January 10, 2024 at 12:18 AM
Ha brilliant Tom, you’re (bang on) although I never thought about the seven years bad luck! even more irony lol! Cheers David
Lane Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 2:40 PM
This has to be one of your most clever Monoku duos, David.
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 2:48 PM
Wow high praise Lin! my ego is rapidly rising, thanks so much, cheers David
Lawless Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 12:02 PM
Well, David, there can only be one Top Gun
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 12:29 PM
Ha! Perfect comment John, only one indeed!
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