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self serving reflections

how can one so discerning ~ be totally blind to all concerning said the suicidal egotist ~ then turned and shot up the mirror

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/9/2024 11:54:00 PM

Maybe his ego had took a hit and he wanted to punish himself by shooting his own reflection. Not only that but now he's got seven years of bad luck. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/10/2024 12:18:00 AM

Ha brilliant Tom, you’re (bang on) although I never thought about the seven years bad luck! even more irony lol! Cheers David

Lin Lane

Date: 1/9/2024 2:40:00 PM

This has to be one of your most clever Monoku duos, David.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/9/2024 2:48:00 PM

Wow high praise Lin! my ego is rapidly rising, thanks so much, cheers David

Tom Woody

Date: 1/9/2024 1:49:00 PM

The good news is glass is relatively cheap. As for me, I hate guns so....

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/9/2024 2:40:00 PM

That’s more like it, nice ironic comeback lol!

Tom Woody
Date: 1/9/2024 2:36:00 PM

What? It's not about me? I'm disappointed

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/9/2024 2:22:00 PM

It’s really not all about you Tom, I’ve been trying to exact these one liners (well in this case 2 liners) a long time! Just enjoy the irony like John below!

John Lawless

Date: 1/9/2024 12:02:00 PM

Well, David, there can only be one Top Gun

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/9/2024 12:29:00 PM

Ha! Perfect comment John, only one indeed!