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Self Mutilation

I'm gonna draw a picture A picture with a twist I'll draw it with a razor blade I'll draw it on my wrist As I draw this picture A fountain will appear And as that fountain flows My troubles disappear

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Laura Mckenzie

Date: 12/22/2009 5:52:00 PM

Tyffani~ Although your poem may seem harsh to some I see the creativity in what you wrote. I can also relate to the action here because I suffer from anxiety and depression from time to time. You may as well? Anyway I enjoyed the tight writing keep writing! Love Laura :) Merry Christmas!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/31/2008 8:24:00 PM

Tyffani, Young Lady if I may be so bold as to ask was this Great Rhyming POEM : a Reality thought or is it POETIC License there are other ways to rid YOURSELF of Troubles Beside the scar stays with YOU for Life look at my wrist 50 Years later can't bend 3 of my fingers...HG