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Self Killing

Ever thought of jumping off a big tall building Not me, I'm a chicken when comes to self killing It ain't that bad Life's just a fad The alternative doesn't appeal, it's kinda chilling

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/10/2017 10:36:00 AM

What ever put that into your mind? You do get the oddest notions.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/10/2017 11:05:00 AM

Don't watch that stuff Jack!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/10/2017 10:40:00 AM

Just watched a program of a guy standing on a ledge 8 stories up and a cop trying to convince him to give it up! He jumped!!! xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 9/9/2017 9:28:00 AM

"Life is a fad?" Not bad//Might steal that line, I'm a cad//It's always passing//We're always gassing//Spilt milk? No use getting sad. CHILL ON JACKIE BOY!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/9/2017 10:11:00 AM

Gonna cost ya! They've just created a new feature on plagiarism! BETTER CHILL IT JJ!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/9/2017 5:59:00 AM

This is an EXCELLENT write my friend! I really loved reading this delightful poem this morning! Not only did this poem flow quite fabulously, but it also had awesome rhyming and terrific humor installed within each line! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/9/2017 6:02:00 AM

Not something I've ever considered! Life's too precious eh! CHEERS!!!