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Self Inflicted Foggy Harbor

Larger than life and totally true That's the love I feel for you You came to me in the nick of time Offered me something so sublime I'm struck with awe,heartily willing To let these feelings be fulfilling Being your lover is my desire I know that you can lift me higher To places I have never traveled In all the years my life unraveled But now my heart is like brand new I feel alive because of you So let us enjoy this time and space I'll keep that smile upon your face This love you give you'll never regret We haven't experienced half of it yet!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/16/2010 12:13:00 PM
i enjoy love poetry it makes me feel happy for others another great poem well done
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Date: 12/10/2010 11:36:00 AM
How wonderful you found this type of love, Deb! Hope these feelings last forever. Blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 12/9/2010 6:57:00 PM
A promising uplifting positve love poem without all the goopy stuff! I like it alot, Deb
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Date: 12/9/2010 5:14:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today Deb. I enjoyed reading it and I wish you a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/9/2010 12:36:00 AM
This is a nice love story. Deb. You said mine was passionate and sensual. If you read it again after my last line you will see that there is truly not one sensual word in it. You just interpreted it that way. That's what I was striving for. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/8/2010 7:52:00 PM
Deb, this has such a dreamy feel to it.. Love it! ;-) W
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Date: 12/8/2010 6:48:00 PM
An awesome poem Deb ! Loved every word ! much love, james
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Date: 12/8/2010 6:15:00 PM
Wow Deb sounds surreal but I know its true as my hubby and I have this too.. a light romantic poem with great positive outlook on LUV ..my fav subject.. thankxx for your comments tonight.. luv..
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Date: 12/8/2010 6:13:00 PM
this is a wonderful piece. i wish my girl would write something like this for me it was so sweet. John Henry Loving III
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