Brooklyn Cruz Poet Quatrain

Self Hate

i tell myself i love me
and then i break my heart
i ask for forgiveness
and it restarts

i tell myself i love me
and i treat myself well
until i make one mistake
then i treat me like hell

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Ts Poetry October 25, 2019 at 6:18 PM Life's full of disappointment, don't let it get you down. Your dreams are sitting on the horizon Brooklyn Cruz October 27, 2019 at 11:25 AM TS Poetry, thank you! Your comment is lovely <3 I hope you have a wonderful life, and I hope you'll continue to read my poetry in the future!

Wayland Bunch October 21, 2019 at 2:53 AM Maybe you're being a little hard on yourself. Or possibly it's just a self observation. I do like the self observation of it. Brooklyn Cruz October 21, 2019 at 7:40 PM Yes, I am hard on myself, but it is also my recognition of me being overly critical. Thank you, Wayland :)

Line Gauthier October 14, 2019 at 10:12 PM \we can relate, Brooklyn. Well penned poem. Brooklyn Cruz October 15, 2019 at 5:21 PM Thank you!!