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A Threading line rhythm poem. Non-contest poem.

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Self determination

Stand firm though winds may try to break your will,  
 Dare to begin where endings cast their shade.  
 Endings are myths that stubborn minds distill,  
 Sow your own path though doubts may leave you frayed.  
 Withstand the tide, for even storms grow still,  
 Drive your soul where inner truth is laid.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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George Avatar
April 17, 2025 at 10:59 PM
Your sagacious thoughts and mature broodings are worthy of appreciation, dear Jay ji !
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 11:14 AM
- Words to take lessons from...great written, Jay :) - hugs
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