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Self Control

annoyed of SELF CONTROL controlled by the insane defined by its people the chemicals changed its the anger in your mind that despised all the rest screw it,despair and ashes suit it best its the refused realization a sick portrait of the young world with a crooked mind its like she plays innocent to pass the time what she lost is sent to no return the only thing that lingers is her annoyance of self control.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/16/2013 1:59:00 AM
I the slightly off-kilter rhythm and the concept is original yet completely universal. Great job.
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Kara Mclain
Date: 3/16/2013 1:59:00 AM
*I love. Not I the.
Date: 6/10/2012 4:43:00 PM
Beautiful writing Liz!
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Date: 5/31/2012 2:46:00 PM
Liz: Welcome to P-Soup, you have a very good poem to shar today - Hope you will have fun in the P-soup - (Write, read and comments other`s poem.) - love from Norway and me Anne-Lise
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Elizabeth Ramsden
Date: 5/31/2012 3:14:00 PM
Thank you. I'm glad I found this site. Thanks for the love.
Date: 5/31/2012 11:43:00 AM
very good!!
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Elizabeth Ramsden
Date: 5/31/2012 3:17:00 PM
Thank you!

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