Self Appraisal

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Unseeking Seeker.

Moment by moment, as life does unfold We find mind not fully immersed therein Assigning meaning to what we behold Diffusing vibrations grazing our skin What we call waking, being grossest state The light of awareness, here too flickers During sleep, senses rested, we gyrate Responses both instinctive and weaker Subtlest state of deep sleep, oblivion We feel rested but know not what transpired Steady attention, distant horizon For ego, it seems, has us all hard wired Let us begin then, with the waking state Choosing, if need be, to endlessly wait 17-June-2021

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

A comment has not been posted for this poem. Encourage a poet by being the first to comment.