Self Actualization

Sweet sounds of every day enriching the life

Empty dark lucky enough into your lights

Life looks in the mirror at its crimson strife

Feeling within how the stars getting bright 


As I walk in the garden looking for your window

Curious to collect the crystals from your braid 

Towards a home in pomegranate that I know

Unable if I am to make it, I’ll lose the cool shade

An amazing struggle between two colored sparks

Lovely corridors into the world of your red roses

In the lightning and laughter that defy the dark

Zeal absolute for the shaft of light that discloses

An arrival at self designed patterns of joy in love

The words aplenty to speak in a voice of poetry

Intensely waiting inside the golden trophy cup

Of tomorrow, your pleasant trellises look at me

Nice construction and deconstruction, this life
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11/11/2016


Self Actualization Double Acrostic
 Sponsor: San Woo 11/11/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kamoonpuri Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 11:59 PM
Wow impressive rhyme scheme and I adore the mention of pomegranates. I also find the word trellis very poetic. Kudos. Do pls comment my latest poem too.
Gupta Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 2:53 AM
Thank you
Onclaud Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 10:43 AM
such meaningful words that enrich the soul, probir!...huggs
Turner Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 8:47 AM
...and most of it rhymes. Just wonderfully thought out and expressed, Probir.
Gupta Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 10:17 AM
Thank you, Daniel for your kind appreciation ...
Trifiatis Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 2:41 AM
Thunderous writing my friend , Probir, with unsurpassed beauty! Good luck my friend!
Gupta Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 3:29 AM
Thank you so much for your encouraging words ...
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 1:01 AM
Wow!!! Probir, you have done exceptionally well here. Good luck my friend.
Gupta Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 3:29 AM
Thank you so much ...
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