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June 23, 2024

For " Carpe Diem" Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Constance La France

Seize The Moment

Dawn is the best time for watching frolicsome birds in my garden
Listening to their chirping, cooing, tweeting to each other,
My life seems fulfilled…although I know,
Everything is transient, we all are proceeding to the inevitable, 
Only the path is different - for some of us, more difficult than others.

Birds don’t care if I am listening to their sweet melody,
They hop cheerfully from one branch to the other,
Squirrels, such adorable creatures, with grey coats on,
Scurry around in such an active  pace
Pretending to be the busiest creature on earth!

The world seems content, the world is gorgeous,
Blue sky, white clouds, red roses, green grass - everything impeccable! 
Do we need anything else to feel blessed!
Nature has a way of calming our souls,
Butterflies and bees - fluttering from plants to plants!
Pollinating, renewing, rejuvenating the universe!

Sun, brightening the whole world, majestic and sublime,
Stars twinkling and blinking in the dark canopy above us,
Shimmering moon shining amid millions of them,
Gazing at the unfathomable galaxy,
My eyes and my heart are mesmerized!

Love like you haven't loved before,
Live like every day is a true blessing - 
Even if we know tomorrow may never come,
Seize the moment - beautiful, and baffling,
Mysterious yet magical, perplexing and fleeting,
Unkind time doesn’t wait for anyone!

Who am I! What’s in my future…
I leave those puzzling questions aside….
Staying peaceful, remaining content,
This incredible life is mine!
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La France Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 2:43 PM
Mala, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem, well done, Constance
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 3:04 PM
Thank you, Constance.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 9:05 AM
Back Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Seize The Moment" write again. A wonderful ending. Glad you are enjoying your life. Enjoy your day as you write it away.......................
Goldsmith Avatar
June 23, 2024 at 12:03 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "Seize The Moment" write with a wonderful ending. "Good Luck" Have a great day writing away...........................
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 6:49 PM
Thank you, Paula. Glad you enjoyed the poem and the ending. You have a great day too!
One Avatar
June 23, 2024 at 10:59 AM
I like how your poem is a celebration of life's fleeting beauty and a reminder to cherish each moment. Its rich imagery, philosophical reflections, and positive message combine to create a profound and moving piece.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 6:48 PM
Dear SO, Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I wish my images are as rich as yours! I am delighted you liked the positive message.
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