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Seize the Day

Seniors' New Year's goal -  Cal strives for push up glory, one should do it















Monoku written January 14, 2021

Copyright © Brian Sambourne | Year Posted 2021

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February 8, 2021 at 12:14 PM

Is that one push up for the day or for the whole year? I could go for the latter. Nice write, congrats on your win ~ John

Brian Sambourne

February 8, 2021 at 12:23 PM

Incredible, John, that you found my small Monoku given that it's 3rd from the bottom of a long list. As for push ups, pacing is everything. One for a whole year isn't unreasonable or unreachable. Go for it. Cheers Brian

February 7, 2021 at 12:47 PM

Lol!Brian, Good one. I enjoyed the dash of humor as well. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

Brian Sambourne

February 7, 2021 at 2:23 PM

My appreciation for your thoughtful thumbs up. Thank you for reading the monoku. Best wishes, Brian

Andrea Dietrich

February 7, 2021 at 10:22 AM

this is so cute. Not sure who Cal is but Congrats to you and to him on his one good pushup .haha

Brian Sambourne

February 7, 2021 at 11:34 AM

Thanks very much Andrea. You are most kind to comment. Cal wishes anonymity. Cheers Brian

February 7, 2021 at 9:50 AM

Cute one, Brian ,congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Brian Sambourne

February 7, 2021 at 11:34 AM

You are most thoughtful Eve. Thank you for stopping by. Be well. Brian

February 7, 2021 at 9:14 AM

you made me smile Brian, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Brian Sambourne

February 7, 2021 at 11:36 AM

Dear Jan You are so fine to support (positively ) so many soupers. All the best, Brian

February 6, 2021 at 6:36 PM

Sounds like exercise, I'm out ~

Brian Sambourne

February 6, 2021 at 8:40 PM

Ah yes. Exercise in a pandemic. Not very appealing. Cheers, Brian

January 19, 2021 at 12:26 PM

push up, push off, push over...one set - one rep....where's the advil.....

Brian Sambourne

January 19, 2021 at 5:13 PM

Precisely. Heating pad a useful recovery device too. Like your take on life, John. Best wishes, Brian

January 15, 2021 at 1:53 PM

Great mono Brian, I can just imagine this one playing out, can we use our knees, or would that be cheating, best of luck in the contest, cheers David

Brian Sambourne

January 15, 2021 at 6:19 PM

Hi David, Many thanks for your comments. Knees are fine - whatever gets us through. Best wishes, Brian

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