Seize the Dawn

Morning’s a given - success, steered by the sun - by noon it’s long gone… May 29, 2022

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Jcb Brul

Date: 6/2/2022 10:51:00 PM

Very heart-warming! Great imagery! Congratulations.

Margarita Lillico
Date: 6/3/2022 1:36:00 PM

Thank you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2022 7:47:00 PM

love how you combined imagery and message. BIG congrats.

Margarita Lillico
Date: 6/3/2022 1:36:00 PM

Thank you Andrea.

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/1/2022 12:17:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this picturesque monoku. God bless you.

Margarita Lillico
Date: 6/3/2022 1:36:00 PM

Thank you

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/31/2022 2:06:00 PM

Congratulations for your win. Well done :)

Margarita Lillico
Date: 6/3/2022 1:37:00 PM

Thank you

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/31/2022 2:01:00 PM

So true, I'm so optimistic in the morning, then afternoon comes and I just shrug, I like your take on the theme, congratulations and thanks for entering my contest~

Margarita Lillico
Date: 6/3/2022 1:37:00 PM

Thank you for the inspiration