Seize My Will

Are you sure you want to be my naughty girl tonight...
are you sure that your lips can handle
the heat of my love head sweet woman,
Take it...Take it all...
feel the depth of my rise for you
as it reaches the limits of your honyed velvet throat
touching the back of your hunger's fervor
grip the base of my soul's lust,
harden the shape and veins of my most sensitive skin,
grasp the smooth sack of my desire's wealth
yank them with the clench of seduction's ownership
feather me there with your soft, sweet hair,
teach me why I surrender my strengths to you
keep me speechless in the ecstasy of your incredible excellence, 
spin a slick lyric around this thick rim of ruby swelter,
sing on me, with the saliva of purest crave, 
feast on me with an unrefined finesse, 
let every surface of your mouth soothe and scathe
slip and glide along the sides of my alert, throbbing attention, 
I'm thrown back by the release of your popping lips
you let the fragranced air of your authority wisp me
speaking to me with eyes that say you have my heart fire in you -

J.A.B.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 1/1/2016 2:41:00 AM
You take my breath away with this commanding, salivating passion, Justin. "feel the depth of my rise for you..." You're on fire, and I love it! Always, Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 1/2/2016 1:36:00 AM
The unbridled passion of this poem does indeed balance a commanding desire with a supreme submission to the power of my woman's seduction and love Laura...that line is the essence of my need...love it from top to bottom...J.A.B.
Date: 12/31/2015 7:42:00 PM
Hi Justin. Here today to just read/reply and visit some. Ah, we may not have winter but certainly it's colder these days... but suddenly it's hot in here :-). Powerful metaphors and imagery capable of eliciting same degree of response from the reader. As usual, your pen has elevated love's sensuality to an altogether different level - one of the reasons why you will always be one of my fav poets. Wishing you more love and greater things this 2016. Kim
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Justin Bordner
Date: 1/2/2016 1:44:00 AM
Its always a testament to the spirit and skill of craftsmanship to have the reader feel, relate, absorb and grasp the essence of the inspiration and to bring it to life in the soul and senses which your very astute comment clarifies. Thank you for understanding my quill fire Kim, and may we both know greater tastes of love in 2016...J.A.B.
Date: 12/28/2015 11:05:00 AM
Wow! What an incredible poem , this is so deep the way u love her is beyond perfection , ur emotions can speak for u , what an inspiring and remarkable poem , I know that I enjoyed reading it...hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 12/28/2015 12:45:00 PM
Yes Dalia, beyond perfection and into immaculate trust and love...J.A.B.
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