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Poetic form: Rhyme/Andaree
Inspired: 2024 April 13
Image: Kaimu Black Sand Beach

Near missed village was Black Sand Beach Kaimu Bay Kai means water, mu means sleep, but nay water, meant coconut trees seas tease trees roots ease sun-bathing seize none bathing sea breeze see land squeeze no longer trees ease in seas new trees, new homes, return back someday Near missed village was Black Sand Beach Kaimu Bay

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/13/2024 4:42:00 PM

I'm impressed that you not only wrote in this form, but also that you wrote masterfully. I think this poem will do well in the contest. Have a great evening, Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/13/2024 5:13:00 PM

Again, thanks for the confidence (eh), Sara. It is somewhat challenging, still early now though. Aloha, William