Seismic Chances

The girl in my dreams,
Earthquakes and trembles,
Be humbles before her nude front,
Sexuality kitten cost,
You still haven't lost.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 24, 2010 at 8:45 PM
Very timely write of passion, Anthony. There were two more earthquakes today. The man in my dreams will probably be the Lord on Judgment Day. Been thinking about the 2012 prophecies and their potential relationship to the quakes, but enjoyed the romance in your poem. Nicely done. Best wishes, Carolyn
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May 24, 2010 at 8:18 PM
U SEEM 2 B LUCKY, LOVE THE EARTHQUAKE AND TREMBLE LINE. NICE TO NEVER LOSE YOUR TOUCH, LOVE IT,,SKAT
Mehta Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 8:14 PM
Wonderful write with nice images
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