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Seijaku

Stop, Take your time Contemplate the snail Its circumscribed life Happily it lives within Its surrealist shell Leaving silvery streams In its wake Having both shelter And protection On its back Although its time May be short It is content Learn from Its fleeting life Carpe diem

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Date: 8/24/2024 8:23:00 AM
'Take your time/Contemplate the snail' beautiful seijaku. difficult to achieve though. congratulations dear poet. happy writing.
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Denis Bruce
Date: 8/24/2024 8:50:00 AM
So good of you to take the time to comment on my little effort
Date: 8/24/2024 7:52:00 AM
I love how your poem ended! Brilliant take on the prompt, congratulations on your win
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Denis Bruce
Date: 8/24/2024 8:49:00 AM
I am so glad that I did not blot my copybook in your eyes
Date: 8/24/2024 4:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Denis Bruce
Date: 8/24/2024 5:01:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to let me know.I am pleased that my little offering merited an inclusion in the placements.

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