Seijaku

Stop,
Take your time
Contemplate the snail
Its circumscribed life
Happily  it lives within
Its  surrealist shell
Leaving silvery streams 
In its wake
Having both shelter 
And protection 
On its back
Although its time
May be short 
It is content
Learn from
Its fleeting life
Carpe diem
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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mysore Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 8:23 AM
'Take your time/Contemplate the snail' beautiful seijaku. difficult to achieve though. congratulations dear poet. happy writing.
Bruce Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 8:50 AM
So good of you to take the time to comment on my little effort
Empress Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 7:52 AM
I love how your poem ended! Brilliant take on the prompt, congratulations on your win
Bruce Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 8:49 AM
I am so glad that I did not blot my copybook in your eyes
One Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 4:46 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Bruce Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 5:01 AM
Thank you for taking the time to let me know.I am pleased that my little offering merited an inclusion in the placements.
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