SEIJAKU

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colour
       supposed
           recorded
experienced 
with
    vibrations
of pleasure

surrounded
in
textured
     frescos
conceived
as
   fantastic
      reproductions
in my mind

in
two
dimensions
   of space
more or less
put
into words
as
part
of the charm
           of thought

from
layered
effects
of calm  
              in this
my Saturday
of
      domestic
                         tranquillity

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thriveni c mysore

Date: 8/24/2024 8:19:00 AM

'saturday's tranquility' 'to put words in two dimensions space' beautiful write, congratulations dear poet.

Ink Empress

Date: 8/24/2024 7:48:00 AM

Back with congrats on your win. Good to see you on winners list

Silent One

Date: 8/24/2024 4:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Ink Empress

Date: 7/27/2024 12:26:00 PM

Ah i love it when you write like this, brilliant flow dear brian. “ domestic tranquility” brilliant word pairing there. Pleasure seeing you post, sending you light