Sandra Haight Poet Rhyme

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Seguidilla -3

     Summer dims, the sun hangs low;

     Autumn's on her way.

     Leaves must fall and snow will fly:

     seasons have their say;

     warm, hot, cool, and cold.

     But soon, a new day will begin!

     Spring's rebirth, behold!



     September 13, 2017

     Contest: Seguidilla
     Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

     Theme and line to include:  Look...A new day has begun!
     7- 5- 7- 5- 5- 7- 5  syllable count
     Line 2 rhymes with Line 4, and line 5 rhymes with line 7
     

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Eve Roper September 23, 2017 at 10:00 PM Congratulations on your win :) , Sandra Hugs Eve ~`*

Subimal Sinha-Roy September 22, 2017 at 12:20 AM Congratulations, Sandra on your placement.

Andrea Dietrich September 21, 2017 at 7:41 PM Your poem is absolutely gorgeous, Sandra. Congrats. I really liked your entry.

Nette Onclaud September 21, 2017 at 3:28 PM this sensitive, heartfelt write brightened my day, sandra... i wanted to place this higher though we used most words from a phrase given... best congrats on your win and thanks for entering... do come by again for my next spree... huggs

Constance La France September 21, 2017 at 3:16 PM Sandra, congratulations on your win in the contest with this pretty write, I love it !

Ashley Conte September 14, 2017 at 4:18 PM I'm seeing awesome interpretations of this topic and your poem is one I tuned to--sunny, inspirational. Did the sponsor request that we avoid using phrases from the lines? We better check; i'll go back to the contest page. Just a thought. Warmest!

Joanna Daniel September 14, 2017 at 8:39 AM Great imagery, Sandra:)