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Seguidilla 1

Midnight in droplet puddles
murky cobble stone
after a crisp whiz of rain,
men sound left alone.
Portal kept silence
into a magical dew
of faint world's absence.


9/14/2017

Contest:  'SEGUIDILLA' Contest 
Sponsored By:	nette onclaud


1. Midnight, not a sound from the pavement.
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Joanna Daniel

September 22, 2017 at 7:02 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win with this lovely write:)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

September 22, 2017 at 12:11 AM

Congratulations on your win, Eve.

Andrea Dietrich

September 21, 2017 at 7:27 PM

It seems that everyone so far I've read who did that picture came up with some marvelous imagery. Way to go, Eve!

Vijay Pandit

September 21, 2017 at 4:43 PM

Congrats Eve on your second place win!

Constance La France

September 21, 2017 at 3:03 PM

Eve, congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful write !!

Heidi Sands

September 21, 2017 at 2:57 PM

Congratulations Eve! :)

Gary Smith

September 21, 2017 at 2:27 PM

Congrats Eve :)

Mike Gentile

September 21, 2017 at 2:05 PM

Congrats Eve!

Nette Onclaud

September 21, 2017 at 1:40 PM

eve, you raised the bar with this astounding seguidilla---atmospheric and right down my alley!... best congrats as i thank you for participating... huggs

Maria Williams

September 16, 2017 at 7:13 AM

A nice midnight scene, loved the line 'murky cobble stone'. Good luck in the contest Eve...Maria

Probir Gupta

September 15, 2017 at 12:36 PM

Enjoyed the rhythm in the poem, wonderful choice of words and lovely imagery, Eve ... Good Night ...

Pipping Stars

September 15, 2017 at 9:57 AM

very tricky ... we really enjoy this type of read ... leaves the mind searching endless riddles ... ... "men sound" "left alone" "portal kept silent" ... whisper ing merely assumed... street lamp lights in a hollow pool... cobblestone drawn mosture marooned... drown ing in breaths breathed by fools... centering lines on golden spools... marking shadows... as fiery fuels ...?... your words n pic inspire ... huh ...

Eve Roper

September 15, 2017 at 12:20 PM

Thank you, Timothy, you are a breath of fresh air :)

Silent One

September 15, 2017 at 8:55 AM

Nice imagery and use of words...

Eve Roper

September 15, 2017 at 12:21 PM

Thank you ,silent one, Hugs Eve ~ `*

Vijay Pandit

September 15, 2017 at 6:26 AM

Lovely depiction of silent pavement and the quiet of the midnight--best wishes for a win, Eve!

Eve Roper

September 15, 2017 at 12:22 PM

Thank you ,Vijay, r, Hugs Eve ~ `*

Russell Sivey

September 15, 2017 at 4:17 AM

Wow Eve, this is spectacular, a grandiose write my friend! I definitely enjoyed reading your masterful poem this morning, you have delighted me by your wondrous skill at writing this rare form! I enjoyed writing this form, how about you? What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

Eve Roper

September 15, 2017 at 12:23 PM

Thank you , Russell, love your inspirational compliment you are so kind. Hugs Eve ~ `*