Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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Seguidilla - 1

 
I walked the lonely dark streets,
I had not a friend.
HE  had pushed them all  a w a y
I ran in the end- 
It was midnight, how 
I prowled like a lost stray cat
but I smiled - MEOW

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September 14, 2017

Verse/Seguildda - 1
Copyright Protected, ID 939766


Written for the contest, Seguidilla
sponsor, Nette Onclaud

Fifth Place

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Eve Roper September 23, 2017 at 9:56 PM Congratulations on your win :) , Broken Wings. Hugs Eve ~`*

Subimal Sinha-Roy September 22, 2017 at 12:15 AM Congratulation on your placement, Constance.

Andrea Dietrich September 21, 2017 at 7:37 PM oh that ending is so unexpected and cute, Constance. Love it! Congrats in this contest. It was a fun one.

Susan Ashley September 21, 2017 at 5:48 PM Wonderful imagery, loved the last two lines! Congratulations on your wonderful win Broken Wings!

Vijay Pandit September 21, 2017 at 4:46 PM Congrats BW!

Frederic Parker September 21, 2017 at 4:32 PM Congratulations Constance for your win in nette's contest

Heidi Sands September 21, 2017 at 3:02 PM Congratulations Broken Wings :)

Nette Onclaud September 21, 2017 at 2:52 PM constance, great element of surprise which knoched me off my feet...a meowy congrats on your award and thanks for joining...huggs

Janice Canerdy September 17, 2017 at 2:06 PM Lovely, appealing poem, Constance! Janice

Joanna Daniel September 17, 2017 at 9:24 AM This was cute, Constance:) should do well:)

Kim Rodrigues September 15, 2017 at 9:18 AM Wow! Nicely done! A surprise ending!

Vijay Pandit September 15, 2017 at 6:28 AM Lovely depiction of the silence at midnight--the last line, a fun ending--good luck for a win, BW!

Sneha Rv September 15, 2017 at 6:21 AM This is so cute! I love how the last line changes the whole theme - Hope this does very well in the contest :)

Jan Allison September 15, 2017 at 1:16 AM I love the cute ending Constance! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Thvia Shetley September 14, 2017 at 10:46 PM The last line gave me a chuckle! Very clever x

Russell Sivey September 14, 2017 at 10:22 PM Cleverly written my friend! I really enjoyed this incredible poem here this evening Constance! You have written such an astounding piece, one at which beats my lowly poem in comparison! I like being able to compare our two as we both did the first line...and you have written the better of us two! Great Work!!