Russell Sivey Poet Rhyme

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Seguidilla - 1

The night has arrived quite dark
The rain has just passed
Midnight has struck, a puddle
Spreads on pavement dressed
By the light beyond
Harken the lamp does express
Water on the ground

Seguidilla Contest, used line #1
Written with slant rhymes (hope that is acceptable)
14 September 2017

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Eve Roper September 23, 2017 at 9:59 PM Back to congratulate you on your win :) , Hugs Eve ~`*

Subimal Sinha-Roy September 22, 2017 at 12:19 AM Congratulations on your placement, Russell.

Andrea Dietrich September 21, 2017 at 7:40 PM Nicely done, nicely won, my friend. Congrats to you.

Vijay Pandit September 21, 2017 at 4:47 PM Congrats Russell!

Nette Onclaud September 21, 2017 at 3:19 PM enjoyed the poetic depth and tonality of this verse, my friend russell... i accept pure and end rhymes, yet you managed to create assonance through your splendid work!...fine congrats on your win and thanks for participating!

Nette Onclaud September 21, 2017 at 3:18 PM enjoyed the poetic depth and tonality of this verse, my friend russell... i accept pure and end rhymes, yet you managed to create assonance through your splendid work!...fine congrats on your win and thanks for participating!

Constance La France September 21, 2017 at 3:15 PM Russell, congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful verse !

Constance La France September 17, 2017 at 9:42 PM Russell , great poem for the contest, Gl

Arthur Vaso September 15, 2017 at 9:34 PM I enjoyed this, dark, how I like it! The photo is amazing too!

Silent One September 15, 2017 at 8:58 AM Great take on the contest Russell..

Vijay Pandit September 15, 2017 at 6:33 AM The night, the rain, the puddle paint the pavement well and the lamp shine as well, Russell! Best wishes for a win!!

Eve Roper September 14, 2017 at 11:20 PM Imagery is wonderful, Russell you picked the same verse I did... Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*

Thvia Shetley September 14, 2017 at 9:58 PM Nice wording and imagery! Best of luck in the contest!