Seguidilla - 1

SEGUIDILLA - 1

Soaked street reflects in silence,
puddles absorb paint,
memories of movement, still
moonglow of a saint.
Hushed squeals of a child -
lamppost relaxes. No boots
splashing midnight. mild.

9/13/2017
Seguidilla Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roper Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 9:57 PM
Congratulations on your win :) , Kim Hugs Eve ~`*
Rodrigues Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 9:59 PM
Thank you, Eve! xx
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 12:17 AM
Congratulations, Kim on your placement.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 7:18 AM
Thanks, Subimal!
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 7:39 PM
unique imagery, Kim. Congrats for your win in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 10:44 PM
Thank you, Andrea! Have been busy the past couple days. Need to go back and read the winners!
Pandit Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 4:47 PM
Congrats Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 10:44 PM
Thanks, Vijay!
La France Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 3:13 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win with this wonderful verse !
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 10:45 PM
Congrats, Constance!
Onclaud Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 3:01 PM
it's not easy to write a cryptic poem , but this was beautiful and deep--success!...congrats , kim, with my thanks for your presence !..huggs
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 10:45 PM
Thank you so much, Nette!
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