Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

Seguidilla-3

Lovely ecstatic new day

Slowly came upon

Sun's luminous radiance

Having heard at dawn

Dark night's awful scream

As new moon's obscurity

Shattered lovely dream.

Placed 6th
September 14, 2017
Seguidilla-3
Sponsor: nette onclaud
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Kim Rodrigues January 18, 2022 at 5:37 AM The contrast frightening and all too real especially in today’s world. New day, slow realization…a scream in the night then shattered dreams. On news today a lone college student in a good area, while working, gets stabbed and killed.

Eve Roper September 23, 2017 at 9:58 PM Back to congratulate you on your win :) , Vijay Hugs Eve ~`* Vijay Pandit September 24, 2017 at 7:15 AM Thanks Eve!

Subimal Sinha-Roy September 22, 2017 at 12:08 AM Congratulations on your placement, Vijay. Vijay Pandit September 22, 2017 at 6:09 AM Thank you Subimal!

Susan Ashley September 21, 2017 at 5:46 PM Wow awesome imagery and rhyme Vijay! Congratulations on your wonderful win :) Vijay Pandit September 21, 2017 at 6:01 PM Thank you Susan!

Constance La France September 21, 2017 at 3:14 PM Vijay, congratulations on your win!! Vijay Pandit September 21, 2017 at 4:52 PM Thanks BW!

Nette Onclaud September 21, 2017 at 3:07 PM vijay, incredible sentiments which make this seguidilla worthy of a win...finest congrats and thanks for supporting my contest...huggs Vijay Pandit September 21, 2017 at 4:52 PM Thanks nette!

Heidi Sands September 21, 2017 at 3:03 PM Congratulations Vijay! :) Vijay Pandit September 21, 2017 at 4:51 PM Thanks Heidi--congrats on your top spot win!

Andrea Dietrich September 17, 2017 at 6:13 PM Oh I love seeing these little poems for her contest. WELL DONE, Vijay! Vijay Pandit September 17, 2017 at 6:40 PM Thanks Andrea!

Eve Roper September 14, 2017 at 11:22 PM love the imagery you have created in your verse, nicely done, Vijay, luck in the contest... ~`* Vijay Pandit September 15, 2017 at 6:11 AM Thank you Eve!

Andrea Dietrich September 14, 2017 at 8:26 PM This is very unique and uses some great imagery, Vijay. Good luck in the contest. Vijay Pandit September 15, 2017 at 6:11 AM Thank you Andrea!

Ralph Sergi September 14, 2017 at 5:08 PM Beautifully worded poem, Vijay. My compliments! Vijay Pandit September 14, 2017 at 7:47 PM Thank you Ralph!

Janice Canerdy September 14, 2017 at 4:05 PM Moving, descriptive contrast, Vijay. Janice Vijay Pandit September 14, 2017 at 4:38 PM Thank you Janice!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2017 at 1:31 PM - Beautifully written, Vijay :) - Good luck in the contest ... hope this will win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit September 14, 2017 at 2:23 PM Thank you Anne-Lise for your lovely comments!

Russell Sivey September 14, 2017 at 1:09 PM This is a finely tuned write, so beautifully displayed and wondrously written! I surely enjoyed reading this enlightening poem here this afternoon! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!! Vijay Pandit September 14, 2017 at 2:22 PM Thank you Russell for your lovely feedback!

Demetrios Trifiatis September 14, 2017 at 9:29 AM An awe inspiring poem matching the glory of dawn my friend, Vijay! Good luck my friend! Vijay Pandit September 14, 2017 at 12:47 PM Honored by your visit Demetrios--many thanks for your lovely comments!

Winged Warrior September 14, 2017 at 8:36 AM Very nice my friend...a winner for sure Vijay...best of luck anyway...god bless...^WW^ Vijay Pandit September 14, 2017 at 12:45 PM Thank you WW for your lovely comments!