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The frost like manna fell and fled And after it so much was dead Brown and shriveled the garden bed We will increase price: all they said But I saw the crumbling paradigm here The crutched economy, the drizzling fear And natures omen so dusty white The trembling truth in open sight Be not so stark the paupers scold Lie to us too, defy the cold We have country, let us be hold Though from pole to pole thunders roll My faith is in God, not what transpires here The coming kingdom and its Christ now draws near From flood to famine I see all Earth's demise and the human gall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/29/2011 2:13:00 PM
So true, L'nass, surely feels like "The coming kingdom and its Christ now draws near". It's scary watching the News...each day something dreadful happens, somewhere. Some get away with the most horrendous acts...do they feel regret or remorse...I don't think so.:( Blessings to you and yours, Mikki
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Date: 1/25/2011 10:12:00 AM
What a very gripping poem, L'nass--this definitely stirred my mind-- really liked how this one flowed too-- and thank you for all your inspiring comments, it touches my writer's soul to read them-- enjoy your week! -- nikko :)
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Date: 1/11/2011 5:18:00 PM
In all this gloom and dread, there is a shining light. The coming of the kingdom of God. Thanks L'nass for your kind words. Blessings and love. Joy (Jew)
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Date: 1/7/2011 8:04:00 AM
Well written, L'nass Shango! You expressed it all! Thank you for your kind comments and have a great time!...Gert
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Date: 1/5/2011 5:53:00 PM
Good descriptiveness and good rhyming go together in this offering. Quite impressive.
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Date: 1/4/2011 4:21:00 PM
L'nass - I have always felt great poems must begin and end in a very beautiful and powerful way - Not to take away from the body of the poem but beginning and endings are what we most remember - This poem was great my friend - a favorite - God Bless, mj
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Date: 1/4/2011 9:53:00 AM
Great Poetry my poet friend... your words are real and tell a story that the eyes cant let go of....Michael
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