Seenery

There is scene to see, for all eternity. Don't you see there are scenes to be seen with all majesty? There be scenes to be seen with all clarity, with total vibrancy. To provide the heresy, of the blinded clergy, with the imagery of the truth of deity. Don't you see? Are you blind? Sight removed, indulging your piety? Teaching your brand of fallacy? Dividing as you preach your unity? The ugliest people I know tout the idea of family, through all diversity, whilst condemning those who think differently. I reject your ideas, willfully. I believe in two things. Living kindly. And living freely. -Angel Fatale-

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/28/2016 1:47:00 PM

Different, interesting and thought provoking. I know the disdain for man made crap was there, its insignificance sarcastically blasted which I like and I embrace the end. I think this could be tweaked into a gem, not that you need to revise, just that I'd personally have fun doing so. I enjoyed it, Ryan ... CayCay

Ryan Tyler
Date: 9/29/2016 11:55:00 PM

I would love to see a polished version of it :)

Ryan Tyler
Date: 9/29/2016 11:54:00 PM

Thank you and I invite you to do just that! As long as I get to read it :). Mine was the careless rambling of a whiskey fueled mind on a vocal run to the dark. I found it 3/4 written in my phone and had to decipher what I had been focused on and where I had been going with it while maintaining the roughness to remain. Because of where it originated.