Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

Seen Tearing Eyes

First day in school life
                                           sorrow blue innocent face
                                               one silent next cries

                                                Mom was in tension
                                           sister took care at that time
                                               seen tearing eyes

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Sara Kendrick June 13, 2013 at 9:50 AM Very expressive work about human emotion..Would be a great Senryu also..Enjoyed reading this morn..It is interesting to see the children when they enter school..Your presence at my work was encouraging..Your comments always lift me up..Thanks..Sara Bl Devnath June 13, 2013 at 11:37 AM Thanks a lot for remembering me. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen June 9, 2013 at 4:59 AM - Sensitive moment .... well written as always bl. - Have a nice Sunday! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath June 9, 2013 at 7:22 AM My dear friend, loved always..........,bl

Len Gasun June 8, 2013 at 7:27 PM I can imagine the nursery pupils in our school with your very beautiful poem my dear friend bl. The parents can't leave them because they kept on crying. Thank you so much for sharing it. I love your poem and so enjoyed. Thank you also for your warm congratulatory comments. Belated congrats in your latest wins as well & this great write of yours. Have a blessed wkend! love and hugs, Leonora Bl Devnath June 9, 2013 at 3:04 AM My dear friend, loved always..........,bl

Nette Onclaud June 7, 2013 at 3:40 PM i did cry when i first went to school, but was fine the day after... splendid, bl...:) huggs Bl Devnath June 9, 2013 at 3:03 AM My dear friend, loved always..........,bl

Harry Horsman June 7, 2013 at 10:12 AM been there and done that bl really can relate,,, wonderful poetry Bl Devnath June 7, 2013 at 10:39 AM Many thanks........................ my friend, loved always, bl

Elai Cee June 6, 2013 at 7:05 AM funny but really cool. i enjoy to read this. have a great day...Elai Bl Devnath June 6, 2013 at 7:20 AM Many thanks for visiting my page and for your comment. Loved always,bl

Sukmawati Komala June 6, 2013 at 2:22 AM nicely done dearest poet bro Devnath <3 :) wish you a great day :) Bl Devnath June 6, 2013 at 7:18 AM A lot of thanks calling me brother and for your nice comment. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A June 5, 2013 at 5:08 PM it's true, when the parent hurts.. their children hurt with them, enjoyed your write,.. ~always, Linda Bl Devnath June 5, 2013 at 8:06 PM Thanks a lot always my friend, bl