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Seen Tearing Eyes

First day in school life
                                           sorrow blue innocent face
                                               one silent next cries

                                                Mom was in tension
                                           sister took care at that time
                                               seen tearing eyes

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/13/2013 9:50:00 AM

Very expressive work about human emotion..Would be a great Senryu also..Enjoyed reading this morn..It is interesting to see the children when they enter school..Your presence at my work was encouraging..Your comments always lift me up..Thanks..Sara

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/13/2013 11:37:00 AM

Thanks a lot for remembering me. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/9/2013 4:59:00 AM

- Sensitive moment .... well written as always bl. - Have a nice Sunday! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/9/2013 7:22:00 AM

My dear friend, loved always..........,bl

Len Gasun

Date: 6/8/2013 7:27:00 PM

I can imagine the nursery pupils in our school with your very beautiful poem my dear friend bl. The parents can't leave them because they kept on crying. Thank you so much for sharing it. I love your poem and so enjoyed. Thank you also for your warm congratulatory comments. Belated congrats in your latest wins as well & this great write of yours. Have a blessed wkend! love and hugs, Leonora

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/9/2013 3:04:00 AM

My dear friend, loved always..........,bl