Seen It Done It

I can hold me breath for years on end
I can fly as high as my feathered friends
Been to the moon, the planets and my home on  mars
Without a spacesuit I’ve touched the stars

I’ve walked through the flames that burn in hell
And come out the other side without it’s smell
Have seen heaven and the angels there in
It made me rejoice and shout and sing

I have stood on the edge of an erupting volcano 
And played Beethoven’s 5th on the piano
I have brought peace to all the world
And passionately kissed every Soup girl

I am a cowboy and a Mohican
A villain and even a policeman
I can wrestle a croc and kill a lion
Around me waist I have the belt of Orion

I’ve leaped from the top of sky scraping buildings
Without feeling pain I can pull out me fillings
You may ask me how I can do all this 
Well I have to tell you my mind is limitless

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/22/2011 4:02:00 PM
Great things to do but I bet your feet are firmly on the ground. I really enjoyed the wonderful rhyme and adventure
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Date: 5/10/2011 4:46:00 PM
i loved it.. very touching and inspirational.
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Date: 5/10/2011 11:56:00 AM
Very awesome write! Very inspiring. sarah
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Date: 5/3/2011 9:14:00 PM
Something tells me you haven't slept at all Mr. H?? What's wrong? It is just after 6 am here. I am sorry about your mom ((((hug)))) love Wilma
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Date: 5/3/2011 8:40:00 PM
There is one thing you still haven't done Mr. Hall ;( enjoyed going on this trip with you btw, loved where you took the "limitless" theme ;) love Wilma
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Date: 5/3/2011 7:46:00 PM
10+, my friend. Impeccable rhythm-and-rhyme. I like this verrrry much. I hope you're submitting this to Paula for her "Limitless" contest. Good luck!! As an aside, methinks your settings are blocking me or something.
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Date: 5/3/2011 6:59:00 PM
lol great write
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