Seems To Me

seems to me if I ignore you
you come a knockin at my door
seems to me if I implore you
you do not call me anymore
seems to me at times I am forlorn
cause I need a fix of you
seems to me you are already taken
and that you ought to be taboo
seems to me for whatever reason
if all truth were to be told
seems to me we will remain friends everlasting
and on that idea I am forever sold
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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April 16, 2016 at 5:15 PM
mike cavanaugh, Nice to read your poem today. enjoyed ~LINDA~
Austin Avatar
September 3, 2008 at 6:07 AM
Seems to me I've been on that friendship trip too....Well?...... better than nothing I suppose. Congrats on this selection. Love, Daver
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September 2, 2008 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations on "Seems To Me" being featured this week. Vince
Jordan Avatar
September 1, 2008 at 7:40 PM
Well I guess some friendships are meant to last forever - Congrats on being featured and God Bless
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August 31, 2008 at 9:05 PM
Interesting interaction in this poem. I really like the last two lines. Congratulations on having you piece feature. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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August 31, 2008 at 6:41 PM
Congratulations Mike on your great poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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