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Seemingly

intermittently 
when shadows
undulate
on walls
i see you
reaching out
as if trying
to comfort me
in these
moments
i miss you
most

nights
seem
as long
as the years
passing by
without you

in a plashet
of tears
i lie here
motionless
as the shadows
fade out
like life

seemingly
i am alone
again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/5/2019 11:42:00 PM
So sad and full of emotion. Love the read and prayers for your heart, dear friend. Love to you, Gina
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/11/2019 11:19:00 AM
Thank you so much Gina... hugs :)
Date: 12/5/2019 11:05:00 AM
My heart breaks for you my friend as I read these wonderfully crafted words on the sorrow that you feel in your heart. Here is hoping your smile returns soon and the pain becomes a dull ache with time. Loved this Sandy.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/5/2019 11:18:00 AM
Thank you Chris...i don't know if the pain ever goes away, sometimes it's just more noticeable i think... hugs :)
Date: 12/5/2019 9:29:00 AM
Wonderful wording Sandra. Sad, but the images fill my head amazingly written.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/5/2019 11:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Jeff... hugs
Date: 12/5/2019 7:20:00 AM
Touching verses of sad sentiments my friend--I hear you in every word--that is the strength of your write, Sandy.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/5/2019 9:03:00 AM
Thank you my friend...glad to know it's emotions are felt... hugs :)
Date: 12/5/2019 5:11:00 AM
delicate and delightful. a lovely tribute to true love, Sandra.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/5/2019 9:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Caren... hugs
Date: 12/5/2019 5:06:00 AM
Nothing more painful than being away from the one we love dearest, Sandra. Beautifully powerful.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/5/2019 9:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Demetrios :) hugs
Date: 12/4/2019 11:38:00 PM
The reader feels your angst. Thanks for sharing this
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/5/2019 9:00:00 AM
Thank you Greg :) hugs
Date: 12/4/2019 11:06:00 PM
Lovely, my friend. Alone...but not really. Hugs <3
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/5/2019 8:59:00 AM
Thank you my friend... never alone where memories exist i suppose... hugs
Date: 12/4/2019 11:06:00 PM
Emotional and beautiful, Sandra.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/5/2019 8:59:00 AM
Thank you Line... :) hugs

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