Seeking the Divine

impermanence of youth upstaged every time by purity of heart



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~SUNLIT RIPPLES~ 2019

AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on November 13, 2019 for contest PROVERBIAL MONOKU 2 sponsored by CAROL CONNELL  -  RANKED 1ST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/21/2019 11:50:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Line
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/22/2019 7:48:00 AM
Thanks,Gregory.
Date: 11/21/2019 7:39:00 PM
this is my favorite so far! Congrats on great win.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/21/2019 8:39:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/21/2019 12:26:00 PM
Hi Line, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/21/2019 8:40:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/15/2019 4:42:00 AM
Feeling young. Thank you.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/15/2019 9:00:00 AM
Thanks fro your much appreciated visit and comment, Kai.
Date: 11/15/2019 12:12:00 AM
the heart will always shine through, if one will only take the time to see it ~ lovely, Line :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/15/2019 9:00:00 AM
Hello There, thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 11/14/2019 7:16:00 PM
real beauty comes form the heart
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/14/2019 8:50:00 PM
Absolutely, Timothy.
Date: 11/14/2019 10:51:00 AM
Line, Purity sought in Monoku' cherished dream. -Richard
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/14/2019 11:12:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Richard.
Date: 11/14/2019 6:53:00 AM
This is truly beautiful. Love it so... Blessings, Gina
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/14/2019 9:57:00 AM
Thanks, Gina. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/14/2019 12:04:00 AM
Ah, poignantly true!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/14/2019 12:23:00 AM
Thank you, Caren.
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