Seeking the Divine

impermanence of youth upstaged every time by purity of heart



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~SUNLIT RIPPLES~ 2019

AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on November 13, 2019 for contest PROVERBIAL MONOKU 2 sponsored by CAROL CONNELL  -  RANKED 1ST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Na Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 11:50 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Line
Gauthier Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 7:48 AM
Thanks,Gregory.
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 7:39 PM
this is my favorite so far! Congrats on great win.
Gauthier Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 8:39 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.
Y. Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 12:26 PM
Hi Line, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Gauthier Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 8:40 PM
Thank you, Alexis. Much appreciated.
Neumann Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 4:42 AM
Feeling young. Thank you.
Gauthier Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 9:00 AM
Thanks fro your much appreciated visit and comment, Kai.
There Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 12:12 AM
the heart will always shine through, if one will only take the time to see it ~ lovely, Line :)
Gauthier Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 9:00 AM
Hello There, thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Mcguire Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 7:16 PM
real beauty comes form the heart
Gauthier Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 8:50 PM
Absolutely, Timothy.
Theraven Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 10:51 AM
Line, Purity sought in Monoku' cherished dream. -Richard
Gauthier Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 11:12 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Richard.
Mcintosh Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 6:53 AM
This is truly beautiful. Love it so... Blessings, Gina
Gauthier Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 9:57 AM
Thanks, Gina. Much appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 12:04 AM
Ah, poignantly true!
Gauthier Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 12:23 AM
Thank you, Caren.
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