Seeking Safety

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A mirror of things he'll never share. Shapeless shadows. A wandering thunderstorm This emptiness can pass. Despite his affluent life, he fasts. He is safe but helpless. He becomes nothing again. Grace means gracious acceptance. If only I could have my way. Normally, I would have slipped away. Our Milky Way galaxy Take me away from this planet. where I may seek a park for our children. Where the sun of peace beams every day No weapons to start a battle or fray. A simple space for love to multiply. Written: March 02, 2023

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Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 3/7/2023 8:04:00 AM

He is safe but helpless. He becomes nothing again. Grace means gracious acceptance. It's like you were reading my mind when you wrote this! A depth of you that I have not clearly seen but very much enjoy. Inspirationally penned! Highest regards A.S.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/3/2023 7:23:00 AM

Dwelling in hope. Your ending line spells the essence of your poem, my friend.

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/3/2023 6:49:00 AM

I wish for all those thing too!, lovely poetry, Harry

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/3/2023 12:58:00 AM

Your last line is great.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 3/2/2023 8:44:00 PM

Oh, so beautiful and longing. I know how you feel Sotto. It is wonderful that you are able to write under such longing for better days, this world is so filled with sadness. Your loving and masterful poet's pen has described the heart of humanity, so longing for sweet peace and joy for all.