Seeking Flavor

A life with no flavor Is an empty tin can; Waiting to be kicked, So it can have At least, one adventure. Mindless metal Rusting in dewy grass; A lonesome ghost of its former self; it hides its pain, too well. What does it do with its forlorn self? It’s lost the capacity to seek flavors around it. Life is an ongoing challenge. When the can is kicked, Adventures are there; Will it realize each New direction? Seek each new experience as it rolls and rolls again? Flavor is everywhere; Waiting for the seeker to taste. When ordinary is in control, A can can’t tell the flavor it once contained; Unless it’s kicked hard enough Go ahead; motivate the empty cans around you; flavor’s worth a kick in the rear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 10:58 PM
Fun poem. Love the message. Well done, ML.
Kiser Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 10:32 PM
Thanks, Line. Your comments are greatly appreciated.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 5:35 PM
We embark on a journey of being.. seeking growth, light, beauty, love.. unpredictable are our stops.. unlimited are the challenges.. a lovely write with a unique imagery.. shine and be blessed M.L. Kiser.
Kiser Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 10:33 PM
Ooh, thank you Besma; love your comments;am glad you stopped by to read and comment.
Pandit Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 3:24 PM
A wonderful metaphor you wrote for life..amazing how you wrote your poem around an empty tin can.. and made it speak to us about lessons in life. Sign of a great write..well done, M.L.K.
Kiser Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 3:45 PM
Wow, thanks Vijay; occasionally I do accidentally have a great write. I do wish every one I wrote could be. Glad you stopped by.
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