Seeking Evening's Peace

It's a nice dreamlike poem. Contrasting beauty hidden in it. Congrats very lately, sorry my lovely friend. am was busy. Loved always, bl

Nette .. Congratulations in "'Rhyme Battle: Round 2 contest''...have a nice one... LUV *LINDA

Very elegant, Nette. Congrats!

nette, your rain contest really made every one nostalgic and was really a pain killer. (: ) Jenish.

Magnificent says it all

Ahh!! Like the metaphoric language in this one..Enjoyed reading ..Sara

Oh, I do like this poem, nette. It is spread across the darkened sky and written with such precise penmanship that the sky is alight with it beauty. Yes.

Hi nette....oh my..how close to home this one hit...loved it...

You so love the night don't you my friend, it is evident again within this write! My favorite line has to be, "Entrusting stars for pains release" this is so true, many people put all their worries upon the stars, so they can be3 relieved of all the pain! This is another masterpiece my friend, such a grand write! I really loved reading this fabulous poem this morning! What a dynamite piece, Great Work!!

Gosh, Nette, you've managed to say so much with so few words. I experience the profound most deeply when immersed in viewing stars.

Got to love those chemises! Light & Love

Hi Nette, An awesome and serene write! Ken

So emotional... looking on the stars in a quite-majestic night brings you calmness in many ways we can't even explain. Sometimes, that's where we find the exact peace in our hearts. This one's beutiful. Take care, Nette! Love,love,love! :-) - Den

This is very different but it has alot of feeling in the lines thank you for sharing. alos thank you for your comments.

- Happiness is not to be 100 years - happiness is living now - Wistful written with beautiful thoughts. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

A stream of beautifully penned thoughts on life and mortality. Lovely flow until I hit the penultimate line "entrusting stars for pain's release*.. Unexpectedly a knock- out, Nette.

Wonderful!

Brilliant like the stars she gazes upon.

Live emotions are felt throughout the lines of "Seeking Evening's Peace".An exquisite poem with rare poetic voice.Memories are both sad and benign; this is a poem for all seasons. I await my muse for another encounter with you, Nette.