Seeking Destiny

My fate lies across the vineyard
Showing the beauty of her face, her lines--
Could this woman be destiny, a bride?
While reflections my heart calculates
Her eyes turn, her sun glowing through me.
Like a velvet weave, I glance sideways
And the quiet of such allure drowns,
That my desolation becomes a quake,
Considering I have someone else,
One who not awake with flames--
What to do ? Life, give me one choice!


Contest for Nayda Ivette Negron
Destiny and Choices ---April 19 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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April 28, 2016 at 12:12 AM
Leon, well done on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
Kimathi Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 6:14 AM
Hi Nayda. Congrats for your placement with this wonderful piece!!! ;-)
Rycroft Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 4:06 AM
congrats great !!!
Onclaud Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 8:32 AM
ohh, leon..what a choice.. sweet congrats!.huggs
A. Sharma Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 10:39 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win Leon..
Raven Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 4:02 PM
Hi Leon, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Mike.
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April 19, 2016 at 1:49 PM
Congratulations Leon
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