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Seeking Destiny

My fate lies across the vineyard Showing the beauty of her face, her lines-- Could this woman be destiny, a bride? While reflections my heart calculates Her eyes turn, her sun glowing through me. Like a velvet weave, I glance sideways And the quiet of such allure drowns, That my desolation becomes a quake, Considering I have someone else, One who not awake with flames-- What to do ? Life, give me one choice! Contest for Nayda Ivette Negron Destiny and Choices ---April 19 2016

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Date: 4/28/2016 12:12:00 AM
Leon, well done on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/26/2016 6:14:00 AM
Hi Nayda. Congrats for your placement with this wonderful piece!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/23/2016 4:06:00 AM
congrats great !!!
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Date: 4/20/2016 8:32:00 AM
ohh, leon..what a choice.. sweet congrats!.huggs
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Date: 4/19/2016 10:39:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win Leon..
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Date: 4/19/2016 4:02:00 PM
Hi Leon, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Mike.
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Date: 4/19/2016 1:49:00 PM
Congratulations Leon
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