Seeking Answers

The rain's pitter patter
Asks me what is the matter?
What is it I see in your eyes?
Longing,loss or surprise.

Is it longing for what is not?
Or loss for what it was?
Or is it what it is that
Has you unawares caught?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 10:27 AM
Nice philosophical inquiry , sharmila
Menon Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 9:07 PM
Thank u Ram for d encouragement :)
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