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The rain's pitter patter Asks me what is the matter? What is it I see in your eyes? Longing,loss or surprise. Is it longing for what is not? Or loss for what it was? Or is it what it is that Has you unawares caught?

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Date: 6/17/2011 10:27:00 AM
Nice philosophical inquiry , sharmila
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Sharmila Menon
Date: 6/17/2011 9:07:00 PM
Thank u Ram for d encouragement :)

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