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Seeking Answer

Mindless insecurities of the restless mind, Tangled threads of boredom wanting to unwind; Lost is the vigor & life is far behind- Large looms the gaping question.. Has he (god) been kind? Fulfilling numerous wishes is a distant dream, Desires turned to bleak hope; shallow & grim. Chances of survival and a re-bounce are slim; Large looms the gaping question... Did I have far too many whim(s)? Far from above, I tower over my past, Oh boy!! haven't I lived it quite too fast? Standing up against the light; Staring at the shadows it casts The image is far-fetched from the one i saw last, Yet again.. large looms the gaping question..........

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Date: 9/26/2024 11:27:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/22/2016 1:49:00 PM
KANUPRIYA SHARMA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/31/2015 10:57:00 PM
KS..., enjoyed reading your tonight. Hope to see you active this coming year. Goodbye, 2015 --- Hello 2016. God Bless. SKAT
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Date: 6/24/2012 4:24:00 PM
All is forgiven...know that you are blessed... I pray you find peace my friend.
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