Seeking and Wanting - Jue Ju

Dripping with the heat of wanting
Deep into the dewy crevice - must seek
Colour of desire - wanton red
Open awaiting relief- quenching desires flow


Penned 23/07/2014 by Seren Roberts

Contest Passion of a Jue Ju
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Richards Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 3:57 PM
Woah !!! or should I say Wow !!! Without saying too much......you have heated up the poetry site with an amazing fire! Well done, Seren !
Roberts Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 1:21 PM
Thanks Carrie but no luck with this one ....Seren
Smith Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 11:46 AM
Very sensual description of the picture Seren...hugs Tim
Roberts Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 1:20 PM
Thanks Tim ...Seren
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