Abdul Malik Mandani Poet Sedoka

Seeking a Sanctuary

Every so often,
Just as a snake sheds its skin,
I yearn to discard this garb;
To strip away all 
the concerns of the world and 
roam free in the wilderness.



~08/08/17
~Form S / Sanctuary / contest by Broken Wings.

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Eve Roper August 18, 2017 at 2:55 AM Congratulations on your win, Abdul, fabulous write ~*

Heidi Sands August 16, 2017 at 8:06 AM Congratulations for your win with this great freeing poem :)

Ralph Sergi August 10, 2017 at 5:09 PM A great mixed metaphoric a simple poem. My compliments, Abdul!

Jan Allison August 10, 2017 at 3:21 AM Oh wow Abdul I can relate to every line at the moment so let me know when you are going and i will come with you - could do with rejuvenation at the moment! Brilliantly penned good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Abdul Malik Mandani August 10, 2017 at 10:26 AM It's for me, by myself, ALONE! But...maybe, in your case, I can make an exception! So, keep your backpack handy! Lol. Thanks Jan.