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For the Pleiades Please Poetry Contest, Sponsored by Rob Carmack  Photograph courtesy of sharkolot, at Pixabay

Seeking

Sea wanders 'neath pink skies,
so green, like restless young.
Scarlet birds are flying
somewhere near orange sun,
soon itself to turn mauve.
Such is way of the world.
Seems purple stars search, too.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Andresen Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 11:20 AM
- As always you color your poems with beautiful words, Evelyn :) - Love it :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 6:13 PM
I extend my deepest thanks, Anne-Lise. Your words always bring delight. hugs :)🌸❤️😊
Smith  Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 3:20 AM
We are all on a path of seeking.
Buehler Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 5:49 PM
Yes, and all of us seaching for different things.😄😍🌸
Sharma  Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 2:27 AM
Awwwn pink skies! Purple starts! Just LOVE thissss 💞💜💫✨ love the sea imagery there and the orange sun soon turning to mauve! Your use of colours is always heavenly, my dear Evelyn.. what s mesmerizing pleiades! Just nailed this! Sending you light and best wishes always, good luck in the contest! Huggssszzz 😍🧜‍♀️🐚🌊
Buehler Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 5:21 PM
Thank you for your appreciation ot this poem and its colors, dear friend. Your delight in it is my joy. Thanks also for your kind well wishes. Blessings and hugs. ❤️🌸⭐
Buhagiar Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 2:11 AM
Perfect pleiade. I used to write so many of them. Lost muse.
Buehler Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 5:07 PM
I love the form! I'm glad that someone takes the time to create interesting new forms now and then. Thank you very much for the compliment.😄
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