Beryl Edmonds Poet Rhyme

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Written - 26th February 2024

Seek the Daisies

If we don't glimpse daisies for the grass
Sadly then it doth cometh to pass
We've missed so much unfortunately 
Wonders of planet earth's mystery.

Every leaf, every flawless flower
Is beauty come from divine power
Daisies are sheer splendour on display
A gift meant for sharing everyday.

For those most appealing white faces
Praise the one who scatters the daisies
That bestow joy to one’s inner soul
Along alluring pathways we stroll.

The least we can do is not forget 
To seek the daisies out on a trek
They come in spring upon nature’s wings
Tremendous things tinkling the heart strings.

Who on earth could never be humbled
By daisies upon which we stumbled.

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Silpika Kalita March 18, 2024 at 2:53 PM You are a true nature poet, who can pick up any wonderful creation and give life. Thank you for your ever encouraging feedbacks on my poems. Beryl Edmonds March 19, 2024 at 3:15 AM Thank you so much Silpika, that’s one of the nicest replies ever. Bless you, Beryl

Jennifer Proxenos March 9, 2024 at 12:39 PM That is so awesome Beryl, I absolutely love daisies and to be growing wild is such a bonus - are they the white daisies, we also have daisies in Autumn growing wild called the cosmos daisies, can grow very tall, sometimes up to a humans height even up to two meters but beautiful in pink purple and white. Strange, you have yours is Spring and we have ours in Autumn. They are an invasive plant brought across to South Africa from England in contaminated horse feed during the Anglo-Boer war. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, Jennifer. Beryl Edmonds March 9, 2024 at 2:41 PM Thank you Jennifer, the white daisy blooms in spring to mid summer here in the uk, later if the weather is mild. I didn’t know daises got to South Africa that way, you learn something new every day. The daisies you have described sound beautiful. Hugs and blessings in return… Beryl

Bill Baker March 1, 2024 at 8:39 PM A lovely rhyme poem, Beryl. I always enjoy it when we see daises while out on our daily walks. Sara and I like all types of flowers. Smiles ~ Blessings, my friend. Bill Beryl Edmonds March 9, 2024 at 2:47 PM Thank you poet pal Bill, it’s nice that you and Sara enjoy daily walks, admiring the flowers along the way… Blessings to you both… Beryl

Mystic Rose Rose February 28, 2024 at 2:27 PM Ever so precious those daisies, in our garden, poetry I really enjoy , thanks Beryl Edmonds March 9, 2024 at 2:44 PM Thank you so much Rose, daises are precious, I agree…. Beryl

Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2024 at 11:17 AM i love this kind of flower. Your ending couplet is so true. Beryl Edmonds February 27, 2024 at 11:48 AM Thank you Andrea, daisies are definitely a beautiful flower. Blessings, Beryl

Silent One February 27, 2024 at 10:28 AM Beautiful sentiments and lovely rhymes and flow.. Beryl Edmonds February 27, 2024 at 11:47 AM Thank you very much Silent One, as always your words are gratefully received… Beryl

Sotto Poet February 27, 2024 at 6:54 AM My dear Belle, your poem is a masterpiece of creativity, brilliance, and beauty. The exquisite language and vivid imagery only serve to enhance the magnificence of your work. A fave Beryl Edmonds February 27, 2024 at 11:45 AM Thank you Sotto, it always lifts my heart to receive a review from you, your words of encouragement are so delightful to read… Beryl

Daisy Meadows February 27, 2024 at 12:31 AM Brilliant and beautiful poem!!! It's a favourite for me! Beryl Edmonds February 27, 2024 at 1:21 AM Thank you so much for that heart warming comment Jeanette, very much appreciated… Beryl

Tom Cunningham February 26, 2024 at 10:48 PM A beautiful flower Beryl, I remember once my daughters making a daisy chain ten foot long. Tom Beryl Edmonds February 27, 2024 at 1:19 AM The Daisy is a beautiful flower Tom, I remember my sisters and I making daisy chains , but ten foot long, that was a fine feat to beat. Thank you, Beryl