Ronald Kent Poet Rhyme

Seeing Red

In your dress I see and blush
Laced deep color instant blood rush
Dizzy with love and roses red
Candle lit dinner we broke bread

Glistening glasses deep red wine
Rosy red lips very fine
Cranberry cheesecake for dessert
Many hours we did flirt

Slowly closer we became
To be one one of the same
Where it goes who's to know
Crimson red the evening flow 
 
8/16/16

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Wendy Rycroft July 28, 2016 at 8:21 AM A very good poem xx Ronald Kent July 28, 2016 at 9:14 AM Thanks for reading Wendy.

Paul Schneiter July 27, 2016 at 6:49 AM This is an intriguing and exciting romantic composition. You use shades of red with great effect, and the imagery is first-rate. Nice, Ron, very nice. Thanks for sharing it. Ronald Kent July 27, 2016 at 6:55 AM Thanks for the comments Paul.

Ronald Kent July 27, 2016 at 6:34 AM Thank you for reading Jan.

Jan Allison July 27, 2016 at 6:08 AM beautifully romantic Ronald using so many shades of red:-) hugs Jan xx

Lewis Raynes July 27, 2016 at 12:03 AM Hot Ronald, great write. Ronald Kent July 27, 2016 at 5:38 AM Thx Lewis, glad you stopped by.

Mike Hauser July 26, 2016 at 7:28 AM This is very beautiful Ronald Kent July 26, 2016 at 8:11 AM Thank you for commenting.

Cheryl Hoffman July 26, 2016 at 6:57 AM Very clever romantic write Ronald using the color red! Ronald Kent July 26, 2016 at 2:55 PM Thanks for stopping in.

Seosamh De Burca July 25, 2016 at 6:52 PM Nice romantic poem with a hint of passion, love the way you entwined the colour red throughout your poem in all its passionate shades. Ronald Kent July 25, 2016 at 7:16 PM Thanks for stopping by to red... read.