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Seeing Red

HATE the deadly poison is coursing through these veins CRUEL the mark you hand left A C R O S S my cheek BETRAYAL the tracks of tears down my cheeks. ANGER the primitive beat sending my heart running into my ribcage. BOOM the sound of the GUN the body dropping the eyes closing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/1/2009 5:20:00 AM
yes violence breeds violence..did you want to become what was visited upon you? LIGHT, Love and many Hugs
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Date: 5/24/2009 7:34:00 AM
thats a sad ending but it leaves one to know that we never know unless we been there it is the unexpected that causes us to worry
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