Seeing From the Roof

From the roof I find things 
I missed when I was on the ground
I missed when I was up in a tree
I missed from my recliner

My perspective is different up here
I feel more flexible, more all-knowing, more open
I feel like an owl or an eagle
Wise and wonderful.
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Wolf Avatar
May 11, 2022 at 11:26 AM
Good for you. I feel more like a chimney ... Enough said right there.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 11, 2022 at 7:47 PM
I would not touch that one!
Hankins Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 10:42 AM
Knowing you, you'd probably prefer to stay on the roof then, but your neighbors would think you crazy, I suspect.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 5:57 AM
My roof is only 4 foot off the ground. We have all been up there - even my 3 and 5 year old grandchildren - except maybe Joe hasn't.
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