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Seeing Double

You may recall our worries for the two. We needed prayers for them when they were new. They have turned into active little girls. With matching big brown eyes and bouncing curls. Sweet Avis Jean and happy Raye Kristine Are just the brightest pair I’ve ever seen. Only their Mom and Dad know which is which. They do not need witch costumes to bewitch. They recently had birthday number two And now think there is nothing they can’t do. Although she cannot tell the two apart, They truly are in charge of Grandma’s heart. ( I checked on line 2 to see if prayers could possibly be counted as two. It is not. So each line has ten syllables.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/22/2012 4:53:00 PM
Hope you were with loved ones on this holiday. Light & Love
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Date: 10/24/2012 2:36:00 PM
Ahhh!!I don't know how I missed this one..Enjoyed learning about the twins..I am glad that I chose it to read this afternoon..I know that you must be proud of them..Sara
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Date: 10/19/2012 12:37:00 PM
Such a lovely poem here Joyce.I wonder if it is for Debbie's contest.She has asked only for any 2 line forms.Please check.
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Date: 10/10/2012 7:14:00 PM
this is very charming!
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Date: 10/10/2012 11:57:00 AM
Joyce they sound like an adorable pair of twins..David
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