Seeing

I wish you could see, how much i love you. your eyes... the way our glances meet, for one blessed moment, till you turn away. See me. I wish you could see right through me and see how much you need me. I need you.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 3/20/2024 2:52:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2016 2:40:00 AM

JEN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 9/12/2015 8:05:00 AM

Jen, awesome write! I enjoyed reading this poem. Skat