Seeing

I wish you could see,
how much i love you.
your eyes...
the way our glances meet,
for one blessed moment,
till you turn away.
See me.
I wish you could see right through me
and see how much
you need me.
I need you.

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rhaya artlyy

September 15, 2026 at 7:05 AM

I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly

Beata Agustin

March 20, 2024 at 2:52 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.