Seeds Hiding

Seeds hiding,
from little sparrow
who so wants to
have breakfast,
seeds will produce
flowers in the spring,
so hoping sparrow
flies away soon.

wrote 8-8-08
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Jordan Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 5:44 AM
James – beautiful as always – YF4L – God Bless, MJ
Winter Avatar
August 11, 2008 at 11:01 AM
I must agree with our darling young Farah who is much too wise for her age. Excellent. Love, Shar
Chamma Avatar
August 9, 2008 at 2:22 PM
That's a great write James...Captures the simplicity of life...Thank you for sharing... TYOne, Farah
Feist Avatar
August 9, 2008 at 1:45 AM
I have read quite a few of your poems and I love this one because I am a bird lady (in my neighborhood) and I have flowers all over the place! Thank you for reminding me that the seeds are 'life' too. Thank you for your comments on my 2 poems. It gives me the highest of pleasures to know that my words put a smile on someone's face. Laughter is the best medicine! Peace and love to you, Karen
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