Seeded Pain

This is far more greater a pain that was ever needed ,
The damage done long ago when it was seeded.
    This hurt you planted deep within me ,
Has grown to a  size that just shouldnt be .
     Disrespect and neglect it means nothing to you,
For it is something you just will always do.
     Love doesn't hurt like this it never  could ,
The words mean nothing to you but they should .
    Compassion and understanding is what love takes ,
If you want to live a love without heartbreaks.
    Talking and listening go hand in hand ,
To love in this life as a woman and a man.
     Im so devistated by the events of these days ,
Not able to to get you to ever  change your ways.
     How can I convince you that it is all a mistake,
And the pain and hurt  I can no longer take .
     Makes me never  wanting to awaken again,
No matter  even if it's  Gods  greatest sins .
TAC
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Merryman Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 8:53 PM
Congrats on your Honorable Mention, Timothy! Love, Kim
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 1:10 AM
Hi congratulations Timothy, this is a lovely write and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx
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February 21, 2013 at 8:46 PM
TIMOTHY, , your poem is amazing, love your thoughts on the topic "SEEDS" for this contest... goodnight~ LINDA
Ivy D Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 8:19 PM
congrats' SandyIvy
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