Seed of Love

a seed of love fell in my heart’s fecund landscape now a tree in bloom
This is my first senryu
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Kavanagh  Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 12:57 PM
First ones are sometimes the best Valsa, be very difficult to top this beautiful picture, cheers David
Lawrence Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 12:55 PM
Just beautiful Valsa ! So very expressive of your heart. All the best, Susan :)
Leffanta Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 10:18 AM
Fragrant, shady or fruitful?
Buhagiar Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 8:30 AM
Great senryu, my dear friend. Romance par excellence.
Poet Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 6:41 AM
Valsa, you've written a beautiful haiku. In three sentences, you've caught the essence of love and how it progresses.
Pandit Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 6:07 AM
And a beautiful tree it is. Lovely poem, Valsa.
Cunningham Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 5:29 AM
You captured love well and how it grows in three lines. Hope you're week is off to a good start Valsa. Tom
Kendrick Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 4:53 AM
Good one. I am glad that the tree is in the fertile landscape so it can flower. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara
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