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Seed of Love

a seed of love fell in my heart’s fecund landscape now a tree in bloom
This is my first senryu

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 1/24/2022 12:57:00 PM
First ones are sometimes the best Valsa, be very difficult to top this beautiful picture, cheers David
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Date: 1/24/2022 12:55:00 PM
Just beautiful Valsa ! So very expressive of your heart. All the best, Susan :)
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Date: 1/24/2022 10:18:00 AM
Fragrant, shady or fruitful?
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Date: 1/24/2022 8:30:00 AM
Great senryu, my dear friend. Romance par excellence.
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Date: 1/24/2022 6:41:00 AM
Valsa, you've written a beautiful haiku. In three sentences, you've caught the essence of love and how it progresses.
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Date: 1/24/2022 6:07:00 AM
And a beautiful tree it is. Lovely poem, Valsa.
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Date: 1/24/2022 5:29:00 AM
You captured love well and how it grows in three lines. Hope you're week is off to a good start Valsa. Tom
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Date: 1/24/2022 4:53:00 AM
Good one. I am glad that the tree is in the fertile landscape so it can flower. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara
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